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Darkness

Discussion in 'Teens OT' started by Rayuzaki, May 17, 2011.

  1. Rayuzaki

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    This is another poem that I've written.

    Darkness

    Floating downwards,
    Towards the ground,
    Slowing as my descent ends.

    I wonder how I got here,
    My mind turns blank,
    I'm nothing but a shell.

    A door in the distance,
    Beckoning for me to come,
    Promising me peace.

    Walking through it,
    I feel no fear,
    Its darkness swallows me.

    Terror consumes me,
    There's nothing but darkness,
    Eating me alive.

    I disappear,
    Becoming darkness,
    I am no more.
     
  2. StillMamamia

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    You write very well. Have you shown your poem and essay to your English or Literature teachers?

    I liked the essay too.
     
  3. Rayuzaki

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    No I haven't, but the poem Unexpected Things was for an English assignment, it's my favorite so far, if you haven't seen it yet, I have posted it on here.
     

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